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Synergy 1/2 critiques for the week:
I really like this. I've done a lot of Six Word Stories, and I appreciate them a great deal.
I think this could be a bit stronger of a story. I think it's borderline statement, but has JUST enough depth to it to be a story. However, I do think it could pack more of a punch. I really enjoy the concept of what the story is, as well as the title. So good job with that. Overall, I still enjoy this alot and it's deserving of a favorite!
I really like this. I've done a lot of Six Word Stories, and I appreciate them a great deal.
I think this could be a bit stronger of a story. I think it's borderline statement, but has JUST enough depth to it to be a story. However, I do think it could pack more of a punch. I really enjoy the concept of what the story is, as well as the title. So good job with that. Overall, I still enjoy this alot and it's deserving of a favorite!